Narrative Essay Birthday Text

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That day was very special and the best birthay that i have had, because there were many things that made my last birthay important for me. That day i woke up ay am, because my parents sang me a special song and they gave me some presents, also my siblings and my parents gave my many hugs, then my cousin gaby arrived to my house and she gave me a box of chocolates and a cd of my fovorite singer, it was the most beautiful present and for this reason iwas very happy that morning. Well in the afternoon many of my friends called me and told me congratulations! you are old, now you can go to the night club, drink beer and you can do many things that before you could not do, for example you can drive,vote, etc. These words made me very happy, becase now icould go out with my friends to night clubs and i could arrive late to my house. But iwas a little sad, because my best friend did not call me and ithought that she had forgotten my birthday. After at pm iwas with my parents when i recived a messag, that was from my best friend vere and she told me i have a surprise for you, iwant to know if you can come to my house , and itold her of course, i thought that you had forgotten my birthay , and she said did you believe it.

If you know that you are my best friend and for this reason i want that you come to my house , itold her yes, iwill go, at what time? and she told me at pm i will pick you up, see you. At night vere picked me up in a beautiful car, it looked very nice, then when we arrived to her house, she opened the door, and all my friends were inside with many flowers and balons, after all my friends gave me a big hug and they sang me a special and beautiful song that i liked and it was my favorite song. For these reasons i will always remember that day as the best birthday in my life and it has been the most important, because i was going to be 18 years old, also my family and my friends were very cute with me. length: 830 words 2.4 double spaced pages rating: red free happy birthday chase life moves by quickly, but from the start of life to the end there are a special days where you celebrate the day of your birth. There are also particular birthdays that you show more special interest to than others. Some of which being, when you finally become a teenager, turning sixteen so you're finally able to drive, turning eighteen signifies you as an adult, turning twenty one means you can buy alcohol, and if you're lucky enough turning a hundred means you've lived to be just plain old.

My friend chase turned twenty one this year, and we may have thrown him the greatest party he'll ever have. The day was june 25, 2005, it was so hot outside, and the humidity was off the chart. My friends matt, houston, mike, mike, and i were throwing him a surprise party at matt's house, and he had no idea. We had been waiting for this for a few weeks now, and had everything perfectly planned out.

He was turning the big twenty one so this was a big day for him, and he was extremely excited about it. He talked about nothing but buying alcohol and beer for himself for the past month at least. You could smell the party in the air, there were hot dogs and hamburgers cooking on the grill, and there had also been the smell of beer coming off the keg taps. The feeling of good times was all around you, as there were at least forty to fifty close friends together. Some i knew better than others, but in all, everybody seemed to be having an awesome time none the less.

We all came together to celebrate for someone we all knew and loved, that's all that mattered. Everybody's anticipation grew, as we ate, drank, and were merry waiting on chase's arrival. You could tell who these people were by how loud they were being, which pretty much meant that the louder people were also the people who had consumed the most alcohol so far. Laughter and conversation filled the atmosphere of the party, and all i could help thinking was this is how i want my twenty first birthday to be. People all formed together to welcome him, and the smile that he had on his face was something to be seen. You could see the emotion coming off of him as he walked up to the party, almost as if he was thinking, someone can pinch me now so i can wake up from this dream.

Some had presents, others had wishes of happy birthday, but i think to him, all of us just being there meant enough. After all of the excitement settled down i knew what to do and said, get this man a drink. He must've been thinking the same as me because when i said that he replied, amen. I thought to myself as i drank with him, i wonder if beer tastes any different when you're twenty one. Think about it, the sensation you get from drinking beer most everyone enjoys, but when you are able to go to any store and purchase it for yourself does it actually taste the same, or better? as the night moved on everybody became pretty intoxicated, including myself.

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