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Question: write a story with the ending, if only i had been more careful, that wouldn't have happened. Your story should not be less than 350 words. tonight was a cold and stormy night. As i lay my head down soft and gently on my comfy pillow, i wondered if mom and dad were ok. They had gone for a vacation to the bahamas and i had to stay back because of my exams. I wasn't worried about it as i've stayed alone many times. suddenly, the lights went out. I could see lightning lashing onto my gate and the roaring sound of thunder that came along.

So i headed downstairs with my trusty torchlight and worked my way to the storage room. I couldn't stand the fact that the darkness was playing games with my mind. an hour had passed till i realised something wasn't right. My mind pondered as to how i was going to sneak around without alerting the possibly dangerous stranger. then, it happened.

He was a huge muscular guy who wore a beard and had hair that was so curly a fly could get stuck if it went through it. I made a distressed call and the cops said they would be at my house in five minutes. as i crept back upstairs, i accidently knocked over a small lamp and it broke. It was the cops who had arrived. i was rushed to the hospital and the doctors commenced emergency surgery on me to remove the bullet. I was then transferred to the intensive care unit icu as the bullet had hit my lungs and i was unable to breathe properly.

If only i had been more careful, that wouldn't have happened. friendships theme write a story ending with my heart bleed and i cried living in a serene village near the pristine sea was a real treasure for me as its tranquillity and refreshing atmosphere with a picturesque sea was a really perfect getaway whenever my head was on the verge with all of the schools’ works and pressures. Every day, my best friend, razman and i would go to the sea to watch the sun sets as the invigorating coolness of the sea breeze caressed our skins. In the eye of the fishermen there, razman and i are kindred spirits and our genuine camaraderie could never be separated by hooks or crooks. I refused his tempting request almost instantly as my condition was not permissible. But, he kept begging me and his constant chatter was really irascible that i thought my head was going to explode. I shouted at him, just go there by your own self and stop annoying me! razman remained speechless upon hearing my yells.

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Nevertheless, about one metre from my house razman turned his dimpled face to look at me and i was at sixes and sevens when he gave me an unexplainable gaze. He smiled at me and i tried to smile at him back but my lips did not cooperate well with my mind causing me to stand there poker – faced. So, i just retreated into my bed room and decided to wait until i am hale and hearty enough before i went to meet razman and asked for his forgiveness. He grabbed my shirt’s collar and shouted in a coarse voice which was very unlikely him you must pay for what had happened to me! i gaped for air and tried to struggle away from him but for a sick person that had just been out of comma, razman was strong enough. My head was no longer aching and i could feel my body’s temperature had been back to normal.

I heard the word tsunami being pronounced loudly but i could not make any sense about its meaning. She recognized me at once, run son! run to the hill and saved your life!   i stood rooted to the ground as my teacher’s words about what tsunami is echoed in my mind. My whole family was safe during that unexpected tragedy as we managed to climb the hill before the waves swept us. On the next day, the government had sent the air forces’ helicopter to bring us out to our momentary shelter. There, i went all nook and cranny to find razman but my search had come to no end.